Thrash riff.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:03 am

http://www.imperial-doom.com/RIFFAGE.mp3

drums are messed up in parts because i suck ass but tell me what you think of the riff, mainly.

we made it in 15 minutes.

Eyesore · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:05 am

Sounds like Trivium covering St. Anger.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:06 am

Eyesore wrote:

Sounds like Trivium covering St. Anger.

are you serious? everyone else i've sent it to so far likes it.

Eyesore · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:13 am

Husker wrote:

Eyesore wrote:

Sounds like Trivium covering St. Anger.

are you serious? everyone else i've sent it to so far likes it.

Hahaha. Of course not. Well, that snare sound is a clear ode to the coffee can. =) The riff is cool, but basic. I would clean it up, use it as an intro and mid-section riff, then some mid- to fast-paced shit for the verses, then add some groovy parts for the chorus. :dio:

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:14 am

Eyesore wrote:

Husker wrote:

Eyesore wrote:

Sounds like Trivium covering St. Anger.

are you serious? everyone else i've sent it to so far likes it.

Hahaha. Of course not. Well, that snare sound is a clear ode to the coffee can. =) The riff is cool, but basic. I would clean it up, use it as an intro and mid-section riff, then some mid- to fast-paced shit for the verses, then add some groovy parts for the chorus. :dio:

Yeah man, my damn snare rings to much, but I hate muffling drums except the kick. Yeah, we're probably gonna finish the song tommorow, we'll see what happens!

The guitarist is really good though, can play foul body autopsy by necrophagist (well a lot of there stuff). Good at sweeping!

Morlock · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:02 am

Hmmm for a thrash riff it's pretty solid. Your double kicking goes out of time in a couple spots tho there

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:54 am

Morlock wrote:

Hmmm for a thrash riff it's pretty solid. Your double kicking goes out of time in a couple spots tho there

drums are messed up in parts because i suck ass

Metalhead_Bastard · **Posted:** Sat Sep 16, 2006 7:01 pm

Pretty7 good, but none of it really made me go "fuck yeah!" and the guitar sound was too trebly. I'm not saying I'm any better but y'know...

hellraiser_xes · **Posted:** Wed Sep 20, 2006 8:11 am

Husker wrote:

Eyesore wrote:

Husker wrote:

Eyesore wrote:

Sounds like Trivium covering St. Anger.

are you serious? everyone else i've sent it to so far likes it.

Hahaha. Of course not. Well, that snare sound is a clear ode to the coffee can. =) The riff is cool, but basic. I would clean it up, use it as an intro and mid-section riff, then some mid- to fast-paced shit for the verses, then add some groovy parts for the chorus. :dio:

Yeah man, my damn snare rings to much, but I hate muffling drums except the kick. Yeah, we're probably gonna finish the song tommorow, we'll see what happens!

The guitarist is really good though, can play foul body autopsy by necrophagist (well a lot of there stuff). Good at sweeping!

3, 4 or 6 string sweep?

Kathaarian · **Posted:** Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:06 pm

Keep working on it. It has potential. *acts like he knows shit about music*

heatseeker · **Posted:** Thu Sep 21, 2006 1:28 am

I like the mini-breakdowns, but I think your basic riff needs more complexity.

*also acts like he knows shit about music*

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