ForFun Exibition Bout: Emokid vs Slayer of Kings! POLL vote

OurFinestCoward · **Joined:** Sun Sep 19, 2004 5:30 am **Posts:** 237

Just for fun, a proposed bout between two lyric/poets who wanted to compete, but missed the deadline. Just post, and give each other hell. We'll make the deadline for an official winner...

uhhhh... 4 days from this post? But, shit, either way, vote through the poll I've set up, because of course this is just a simple exibition. Alright?

Don't be shy, don't be bashful, post you MUTHAS!!!

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:44 am

At least warn me before you do, asshole :?

Deadline is Thursday morning, right? And two texts or one?

Stefan · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:01 pm

Slayer Of Kings wrote:

At least warn me before you do, asshole :?

Deadline is Thursday morning, right? And two texts or one?

don't bother 'cause I sure won't... I said I will not be part of this contest and so I won't.

thanks for warning me before OFC :?

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:23 pm

Pansy.

Seinfeld26 · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:48 pm

Heh, looks like this will be a "locked topic" if flame wars ever get locked.

Stefan · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 1:09 pm

Slayer Of Kings wrote:

Pansy.

say it with flowers...

...ok ? :roll:

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:02 pm

Fine then. Here's my entry; its shoddiness might urge you to participate after all ;)

Quote:

The Narcist

When the light first erupted
The day had already passed by
When the first dew fell
The rain it stopped

Then I was there, from the corner of my sight
Like the contents of a sealed book
Enigmatically projected
Steerless without a sail
A cavity in the tooth of time
On a rhythmic sea, inconceivably wide

And in the first second, I knew
I would ever be full
So would I be empty
Yet never full of emptiness

When the first flower blossomed
The snow was but a second away
When the moon appeared at last
The clouds would not part

I could not see further than myself
as my Self chose not to uncover my eyes
All that remained of my vanity
Turned into and on itself
Forming my anti-identity
To erase my name by heart.

Yet after counting a million days, I knew not
I would forever be full of myself
And emptied as a result
But never devoid of myself.

When the first heartbeat could be heard
It was eclipsed by a great thunder
When the first kiss was given
The knowledge of love strayed

When I uncovered the veil of my reflection
It brought only the loneliness of beauty
And as it withered and faded in time
It brought the beauty of loneliness.

Misha · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:19 pm

I'm very glad you did not compete in the contest ;)

Stefan · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:32 pm

Quote:

ROTTEN APPLES

it's a non-ego morning
all naked in the weak light glowing
Statues of indesion
Filing for the final deception.
Soap perfume fills the air
No one's moving, nobody stares
lost in self contemplation
for the great assimilation
process.

chorus :
something pops up in your mind,
the rotten apples of your kind
never get a second chance
to be allowed into the dance...
...again !

petrified, undignified
the silence and its scary side,
Isolation and detention
A certainty, no remission.
and the fear inside
the loss of pride
the feeling of stagnation
when nothing's left but depression
and death !

(chorus)

how to escape
this inner cell, this path to hell
the smell of sweat,
the blood, the filfth is everywhere !

(chorus)

are you happy now ? :roll:

and since it's a "for fun exhibition" I allow myself the rigt to vote for SoK :wink:

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:45 pm

Yes, very happy

I vote for T.I.E.

Stefan · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 8:51 pm

Slayer Of Kings wrote:

Yes, very happy

I vote for T.I.E.

yet you didn't :cry:

:wink:

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Aug 28, 2005 9:12 pm

Whoops, sorry ;) I thought only posts were needed, and that OFC would count 'em.

Still, be grateful, you're in the lead now ;)

Stefan · **Posted:** Sun Sep 04, 2005 11:33 am

looks like I won after all... :roll:

thanks for whoever voted for my lyrics, that was nice of you.
and sorry SoK :wink:

Goat · **Posted:** Tue Sep 06, 2005 4:45 pm

We should do this type of thing more often. And when is Aaron vs Misha?

Misha · **Posted:** Tue Sep 06, 2005 5:03 pm

Aaron is curently in the hospital because he had problems with his right ball or something. He'll be out in some five or six days which will be when we pick up the match.

:wink:

Goat · **Posted:** Tue Sep 06, 2005 5:07 pm

Gast1 wrote:

Aaron is curently in the hospital because he had problems with his right ball or something. He'll be out in some five or six days which will be when we pick up the match.

:wink:

Yikes.

Dead Machine · **Joined:** Sun Sep 19, 2004 6:24 pm **Posts:** 2527

Rest assured that my right nut is fine and in place.

Goat · **Posted:** Tue Sep 06, 2005 5:12 pm

Dead Machine wrote:

:lol:

Rest assured that my right nut is fine and in place.

Phew. Had me worried for ya there, pal.

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