Dead Machine wrote:
Uh... shit
I'm torn.
I like both of em a lot,
and Valefor would be
a shoo-in
had the second one
been the one
that counted...
but I like
the meaning behind Gast's
and the rhythm that it has
I'm torn.
I like both of em a lot,
and Valefor would be
a shoo-in
had the second one
been the one
that counted...
but I like
the meaning behind Gast's
and the rhythm that it has
Quote:
Um... okay... go with what pops up in my head first...
Gast it is.
Gast it is.
Well well... i think Valefor and Misha should be ashamed of them self :? funny to see how the best poem was written by a man not in the competition...imo Dead Machine outmatched you both!
In his poem we see a strungle (*1), and that's excatly what life is all about ... life is about making decisions, and sometimes you make mistakes... The poems is asking alot of question it self: Does Valefor's shoes fit me and why is Misha refering to himself as Gast1 meaning Guest1 in english (*2). The author (*3) tries to answer them himself, then it's up to the reader to chose weither or not he believe the answer is correct (*4). Real art is made to make you wonder and reflect over life, and this poem live up to that demand.
What really makes this poems stand out from the rest is that the author purposely structured the poem in a way so it didn't look like normal (mainstream) poem. I see a bright future ahead for young master Aaron.
Footnotes:
(*1) :
Quote:
Uh... shit
I'm torn.
I'm torn.
(*2) : www.dictionary.com
Quote:
Guest :
1 : One who is a recipient of hospitality at the home or table of another.
2: One to whom entertainment or hospitality has been extended by another in the role of host or hostess, as at a party.
3: One who pays for meals or accommodations at a restaurant, hotel, or other establishment; a patron.
4: A distinguished visitor to whom the hospitality of an institution, city, or government is extended.
5: A visiting performer, speaker, or contestant, as on a radio or television program.
6: Zoology. A commensal organism, especially an insect that lives in the nest or burrow of another species.
1 : One who is a recipient of hospitality at the home or table of another.
2: One to whom entertainment or hospitality has been extended by another in the role of host or hostess, as at a party.
3: One who pays for meals or accommodations at a restaurant, hotel, or other establishment; a patron.
4: A distinguished visitor to whom the hospitality of an institution, city, or government is extended.
5: A visiting performer, speaker, or contestant, as on a radio or television program.
6: Zoology. A commensal organism, especially an insect that lives in the nest or burrow of another species.
one can only wonder about which group Misha belongs too :roll: Based on the fact that he's called Gast1, i assume he thinks of himself who's the most important, Me FIRST ( the "1"). A guest is someone who doesn't contribute with anything, he is utilizing his host, in this case MR, to reach his own goals....
(*3) : Aaron - Biography : http://www.metalreviews.com/reviews/reviewer.php?id=27
(*4) :
Quote:
Um... okay... go with what pops up in my head first...
Gast it is
Gast it is
don't blame me! blame sociaty!
thanks alot dude, i was afraid you might wanted to rip of my head 
I'm always funny